Stuff Freshmen Write

“Especially men face different pressures; a weak mental capacity will lead to greater pressure on their own. For example, because of the pressure of work, a man feels the pain of life, and is in a bad mood. He does not know how to be a person who likes to live, and how to fix challenges. Erma Jeab Lawson believes that the pressure of the social environment, as well as racial discrimination, leads to the men cracking under work pressure, so that marriage is not stable (40). The end result is that people do not know how to release the pressure; they work in a bad mood back home, not only to be terrible at work, but also to the whole family in the unpleasant situation.” English 101 Cause and Effect paper on divorce

“Some drugs such as Advil or IV Profane are used to take pain or sickness away, but they are also good for the body to a certain extent and some people uses them and causes them to be addicted.” Engl 101 Cause and Effect paper on drugs

“The one path is the path of truth. It is not going to change. It will always be the truth. It may have ruts, pot holes, and curves along the way, but it will always remain the truth. This is the path of following Jesus. The second path is the path of the world, or of Satin . This path will be worn, and will look very inviting at first. It will look this way as far as you can see. This path will not tell you the ending or consequence of your action until you are there. When you reach this point you will be on your own. There will be nobody there to offer you assistance or show you the way out.” Engl 102 paper on Robert Frost’s “The Road Not Taken”

“I myself have never got a grade that I didnt work my tail off for,so I don t fall in that category. I do agree with the idea that the smarter people should nt just be allowed to,’slide by.’Givin the best grades , with half the work.I expierience that eveyday.I m not jealous.It just drives me to try harder.I was impressed,when he was speaking of his wives ,’big heart’, after downing her math skills. I ‘Sorry!’I dont believe people should be judged on a letter grade.I don t think people should be judged at all,for that matter.Weshould focus more on the heart than the brain. I ve done just fine.” An Engl 101 paper responding to an article on grade inflation.

“The babies who were born here they are implanting the microchips in their left hand to have them controlled by the government. The major worry of the public education is that a lot of foreign students come to the United States to study and that they don’t even have the microchip implanted in their left hand. That is a big worry in the government system.” English 101 student.  Paper assignment was responding to an article on the value of education.

“I actually like the fact that border are opened because it’s such diversity, instead of just the same kind of ordinary races” Engl 101 student in an Argumentative Essay on U.S. border security

“Many of the men that are involved in playing hockey get aggressive on the ice, in personal relationships, and thus, ruin their life.” English 101 student

“Otherwise, depression can in fact take over in the mind in the man or men’s mind to make a choice that will be either life changing for him or for his family and friends.” English 101 student in a Cause and Effect paper on depression.

“It is true that some aborted women do not experience any of the mental health problems at all, but the majority of them do.” English 101 student in an Argumentative Essay.  “Abortion” was a banned topic for this assignment.